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Interview with Flashlight Commentary

The following interview with me originally appeared January 21, 2014 on Flashlight Commentary (http://flashlightcommentary.blogspot.com).  Head shot 3

Welcome to Flashlight Commentary. To start things off, please tell us a bit about Anvil of God.

It is a story about what happens to the family of Charles the Hammer when he dies.  The power behind the Merovingian kings (recently made famous by Dan Brown’s Da Vinci Code) Charles wants to take the throne for his children.  Only one thing stands in his way.  He is dying.  He tries to bequeath the kingdom to his three sons and marry his daughter off to a Lombardy prince (to secure his southern border), but the only thing to reign after he dies is chaos.  Son battles son, Christianity battles paganism and his daughter must choose between love and her family’s ambition.

What inspired you to write this story?

I had studied Charlemagne in college and read the Song of Roland, an epic poem about one of Charlemagne’s greatest knights.  I remember thinking that it would the basis for a great novel. I always thought that if I were to write a novel, I would start there.  Years later when I finally decided to write it, I had to decide whether to follow the true history of Charlemagne and Roland or follow the legend. When I did the research, I fell in love with the history.

What research went into Anvil of God and did you discover anything particularly surprising while investigating the background material for you book?

Researching that period of history is a bit of a challenge.  There are very few sources that bring all the pieces together into one place.  I had to research Bavarian history, Alleman (German) history, Thuringian (Flemish) history, French history, Italian history, Church history.  Then, after I had put the timeline together, I struggled with where to start.  I couldn’t seem to find a good place. I kept moving back in time to discover something compelling that would capture my (and the reader’s) interest. I found that the story kept getting more interesting, the further back in time I moved.  I ended up so far back in time, that the Anvil doesn’t even mention Charlemagne – it is the story of his parents and the conflicts that led to the family’s rise to power.

What drew you to this particular period and why use it as the backdrop of your story?

One story in particular captured my interest.  Charles the Hammer’s daughter fled his court to find love amongst his enemies.  It was, according to some historians, the biggest scandal of the Eighth century.  How could that have come to pass?  How did they meet?  When did they fall in love? How did she get away?  How did she cross the continent on her own?  She must have been quite a character.  When I read her story, I knew I had found a place to start.

Another question from my research begged an answer.  I knew that Christianity had become the dominant religion on the continent (the Merovingian kings converted two centuries earlier), but so much of the Church history of that time period had to do with converting the pagans (and/or suppressing the pagans).  How could that be?  St. Boniface, who is a main character in the story, made his mark doing missionary work in what is now Germany and Bavaria.  If Christianity was so dominant, why was all that missionary work necessary?

That led me to make the conflict of religions (and the power associated with it) a key factor of the story.

The historic record for this period is sketchy at best. How did you approach composing a novel from a story with so many unknown elements? 

Actually, by writing the novel, I got to fill in the gaps.  I knew what happened, but I didn’t know why.  And you can’t understand why unless you figure out what motivates the people who shaped the history.  So, when you get down to it. Anvil is a story about a family. And by telling their story – what motivates them, and the choices they make – the history falls into place.  I didn’t try to write the history, I tried to tell the story of a family in crisis. Only this family’s choices affect an entire continent.

You probably have many, but is there one scene that you particularly enjoyed writing?

I enjoyed bringing to life a religion about which we know very little.  Having been raised in the Catholic Church, I was very familiar with the rites and prayers that surround that faith.  What rites and prayers would bring the pagan faith to life?  There is a scene about mid-way through the book with a sibyl that seemed to come out of nowhere for me.  It was so otherworldly, that I took great delight in writing it.

What scene posed the greatest challenge for you as an author?

The sex scenes were difficult, at first.  So much has been written about sex – and so much of it poorly – that I struggled with finding the right tone.  I didn’t want to have the characters kiss and then fade to black.  I felt like it was dishonest for me as an author to shutter such a big window into their characters.

But the language for sex has been so overdone, I agonized over the first scenes I wrote.  A writing professor eventually helped me out.  She said sex between two people is so intimate that people create their own language for it; they establish their own rituals. So, if you are writing about sex, it must be intimate to that character.  It must use language that that character would use.  Writing about sex should provide a unique insight into the character.  If you are writing to titillate you reader (or yourself for that matter) you are doing it for the wrong reasons.  After I understood that, it became easy.

Sometimes fiction takes on a life of its own and forces the author to make sacrifices for the sake of the overall story. Is there a character or concept you wish you could have spent more time with or expanded on? 

There were a lot of scenes that never made the final cut.  My problem, as an author, (or so my editors tell me) is that I like to tell ALL the story.  I take out the mystery.  You see the story from every perspective.  What they’ve taught me, is that sometimes it is better for the reader to wander around in the dark – just like the characters – to build some suspense for the resolution.

Fortunately, I have some good editors.  Unfortunately, some of my favorite scenes had to be cut.

If you could sit down and talk with one of your characters, maybe meet and discuss things over drinks, who would you choose and why?

I would love to meet Charles.  The man was a force of nature.  He literally conquered a continent and saved Christianity in Europe.  Bradius would be my second choice because his character is so complex. I’d love to see the world from his perspective – as painful as it is.   I’d also love to meet Sunni, but I doubt she would take time to bother with me.  She too was a force of nature and didn’t suffer fools lightly.

What do you hope readers come away with after reading your work?

I hope they put down the book and say “Wow!  What a great story.”  Then, I hope they say, “I can’t wait for Book II.”

Finally, what is next for you? Any new projects waiting in the wings?

I’m about halfway through Anvil’s sequel “Wheel of the Fates” which picks up the story two months after Anvil’s conclusion.  I’m also working on a novel that is somewhat closer to our timeframe and perhaps more familiar to readers.  It’s called “Sin of Omission.” It’s the not-so-pretty story of Ben Franklin as a young man.

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The Legend of Shane the Piper

I exchanged books with Rick Spier last week and received a copy of his “novel memoir” The Legend of Shane the Piper and his second book O’Sullivan’s Odyssey.

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I sat down with Legend and found I couldn’t put it down.  That’s not to say it is an easy read.  It’s not.  It’s a tough story that chronicles Rick’s abandonment by his parents, his life with abusive foster parents, and his subsequent abuse of alcohol at Dartmouth College.

I think it was doubly hard for me as I knew Rick in college – but didn’t know of the anguish and pain he suffered at the hands of all three.

Forced into acting as a surrogate for a violent foster father, Rick performs well as an athlete in high school, even though he has no real love for sports.  His athleticism helps him attract the attention of the Dartmouth football program and Rick finds himself in college and “free” to define himself for the first time.   He walks off the football field and into the arms of Dartmouth’s Animal House culture of the late 1970’s where drinking was glorified and students were often bullied into chugging one beer after another until they were drunk.  Not a great environment for someone struggling to find himself.  Rick embraces the culture, but is never sure that the culture embraces him.  Although he finds a way to maintain his grades and graduate, his demons are never far from him and he carries his alcoholism well into adulthood.

This too, is no easy ride.  His foster father murders his foster mother and commits suicide, his wife nearly dies of an ectopic pregnancy, and his older daughter was diagnosed with Rett Syndrome.  “In sum,” Rick writes, “it was another donkey-ride-through-Hell that destroyed my marriage and family and left me pretty much destroyed as a human being.” Like I said, it’s a tough read.

Legend seems to be Rick’s way of exorcising his many demons so that he can now live his life the way he chooses – sober and as a writer.  Using his Dartmouth experience as a backdrop, he ping pongs his way across the years vomiting his abused life on the table for all to see – chunks and all.  Dartmouth suffers greatly in this role, playing the single-minded, and shallow role of a fraternity haven.  It is much more than that, but Rick either chooses to not tell that part of the story or never saw it through the haze of the abuse he suffered.  That he loves the school is evident; the why, however, is not.

In some ways, I felt the memoir was meant for me to read.  It clearly is a confession of sorts – it screams, this is who I really am! – and its focus on our alma mater is so specific to time and place that it feels like a shared memory.  He even bookends the story with visits to his 25th and 30th reunions.

I, for one, am happy and relieved that through hard work and the help of his second wife, he is at last sober and finding happiness.  Rick is a compelling writer and I look forward to reading O’Sullivan’s Odyssey.

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